this is not done yet, i am just looking for some critical cratique. I know what i think is wrong but i want a second opinion.

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this is not done yet, i am just looking for some critical cratique. I know what i think is wrong but i want a second opinion.

feel free to e-mail me here or back at the fdf group if you wish not to comment here.
this is not done yet, i am just looking for some critical cratique. I know what i think is wrong but i want a second opinion.

A few Saturday ago, I got some drawing done and I am quite happy with the end results, the hand I had to erase once and redo but that is my weakness.

Pencil on paper (sketch book)
Prints can be bought at Deviant Art here
oh, by the way, I am in Canada, Toronto to be exact for work, hope to go home next weekend but i am afraid it might be 2 weeks yet...



some drawing as done the same time as the last painting, all pen on paper...
all form the deconstructing the box project (journal)
this painting is from last weekend...

oil on paper,
I am not sure if it is trully done, I think i will be making it into a dipdick or tripdick
this is a charcoal version of a recent one, i am not happy with the hand, i think i need to work on hands again...



after work

eating bbq at Rudalph's, was not nearly as good as i had hoped. Main complaint was that the ribs were not falling off the bone

Just seemed right to do...

This last one is also a figuratve drawing, just heavily cropped, I am feeling i should play around more with cropping.
ok, it is not much but it is some. basically it is some stuff in my little journal, something i am intending to do a lot more of...

a friend's pose

out back of my apartment

same pose as above but quicker and more abstract, and higher up

do to all the spam i have been getting in the comment section i have turned off the comment option for now. after i have figured out how to stop the most of it i will be turning the comments back on...
i went back into a painting that i was not fully happy with last weekend, and this is the final result, i have to say that i am much happier with the results

i also started a new painting too, something i will be going back into later today or tomorrow...

lots of work left but you can get the point!