this is not done yet, i am just looking for some critical cratique. I know what i think is wrong but i want a second opinion.

feel free to e-mail me here or back at the fdf group if you wish not to comment here.
this is not done yet, i am just looking for some critical cratique. I know what i think is wrong but i want a second opinion.

feel free to e-mail me here or back at the fdf group if you wish not to comment here.
this is not done yet, i am just looking for some critical cratique. I know what i think is wrong but i want a second opinion.

A few Saturday ago, I got some drawing done and I am quite happy with the end results, the hand I had to erase once and redo but that is my weakness.

Pencil on paper (sketch book)
Prints can be bought at Deviant Art here
oh, by the way, I am in Canada, Toronto to be exact for work, hope to go home next weekend but i am afraid it might be 2 weeks yet...